Is a sens of humor important in life?
The sens of humor is important in our life. In my opinion we need it to contact with other people. Sometimes our friends joke about us and we can take it away badly without sens of humor. If we don't have sens of humor, new people who could get to know us better will be reluctant to do it. They can have bad opinion about us and in result our good friends moving away from us.
There is no concluding sentence here. You keep developing your idea and the paragraph has no 'closing'.
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